The shadow of your smile lies
Across the smooth white perfection
Of my view.

Like a chasm that splits
A snowfield in two.

A divide between the perfect and the perfect.
A bottomless rift
That will forever divide my life.



  1. #1 by helenvalentina on February 16, 2013 - 10:35 pm

    Love your writing, it is very powerful and diverse! 🙂

    • #2 by David Kitching on February 16, 2013 - 10:56 pm

      Thank you. I like yours too. Clearly a ponderer. Reflective. Seeker perhaps? Not sure of your place?

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