As surgeon’s fingers
Slice the surplus fat away.
Words as blades should cut.
haiku, human interaction, Writing
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#1 by redgladiola on June 30, 2014 - 12:18 am
Nice. I’ve hard about trimming your words, but haven’t seen the work as being compared to a surgeon’s before. =)
#2 by Rayconnell on June 30, 2014 - 12:18 am
So true. If you don’t mind, could you check out my blog, at http://rayconnell.wordpress.com? It would mean a lot, thanks 🙂
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